- Title: Midnight
- Artist: csifool
- Description: In a nut shell:figure it out for your self.heresa hint,it compares two things and has a deep meaning.ENJOY ^.^
- Date: 09/04/2009
- Tags: midnight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ClassyZebra - 09/26/2009
- I'm confuzzled
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- wazowski01 - 09/07/2009
- its very interesting. I was trying not to think while reading this there are many things in it I do not understand. But that's just the way I am. My mind started to wander a little. I think that its very good.
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- Veteran13 - 09/05/2009
- I actually did a lot of thinking and i came up with an answer that I'm not even sure is right but its a shot smile . Well I'm thinking that its comparing the way the girl in the poem imagines the midnight sky and how the midnight sky must really be like and the girl opens her eyes only to find that she was imagining the sight. The poem shows how a girl saw something beautiful of something that would be normal to other people smile . I don't know if I'm right but its a beautiful poem. Good job love. <3
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- meeleea - 09/05/2009
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It would seem I'm useless at finding deeper meanings. xP
I suggest checking for proper punctuation. Your commas are often lacking or misplaced. Watch out for run-ons!
Other than that, there's some good description here. I particularly enjoyed the bits about the sky towards the beginning. - Report As Spam
