- Title: A Different Kind of Tiger
- Artist: csifool
- Description: This is about a person,and why their past gave them the name of Tiger.
- Date: 09/05/2009
- Tags: different kind tiger
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Comments (7 Comments)
- csifool - 04/22/2010
- lol thx, i was writing it of the top of my head.so i wasnt really correcting it.
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- blobguypwns - 04/22/2010
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The last sentence absolutely fulfills it, givine it the full "oomph" that it needed! ABSOLUTELY STELLAR!!
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- csifoolstwin - 10/09/2009
- that was AMAZING!!!! did i mention im ur BIGGEST FAN!!!!!
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- Stellar Witch - 09/28/2009
- Wow!Its so ... well, natural!
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- CannibalWizards - 09/11/2009
- Aw. I really like it. Especially that last sentence. biggrin
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- meeleea - 09/08/2009
- I so agree with Zuniboy! This is great story! The emotions are fresh. The memories are well illustrated and have the nostalgic feel of true recollections. Plus, the allusion at the beginning made me smile. ;3 Again, the vocabulary could be richer, but I guess your words show the innocent times of youth. Maybe try finding synonyms things that repeat themselves, like care free (you had already used without care, and later on you use uncaring. There's a little too much caring going on for my taste)
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- zuniboy - 09/05/2009
- WOW!!! I like this the best. Its kind of like being there without being there. Memories of my time running and playing as alittle boy, having fun with the time I have here and knowing it all good.
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