red

• Artist: xoxkenny93xox
• Description: wrote this ages ago
  
  plz comment
  
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• Date: 01/24/2009
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when you see a tint of red,
the sign of blood when someone's dead,
the sign of someone who came to kill,
the one sat on your windowsill,
a person with eyes filled with hate,
the one that will decide your fate,
who knows what they're going to do,
when they get their hands on you...

Comments

[Sweet kiren]

why aren't you like a writer or something? You're really good!

[Tsukyume]

Interesting, leaves room for people to imagine their own scene and setting.. it's good, I like it.

[[[Tallia]]]

I like it. I'm not exactly sure what its referring to, but I enjoyed the mystery to it. Also, it had great rhyme and meter.