My Revolution

• Artist: lucileec
• Description: the cycle of life written without direct words. freestyle with repetition. i put in way too much time on it, but i hope yall like it! :D this is the first time i have entered anything on gaia, so please be nice! :P
• Date: 12/02/2010
• Tags: revolution

My Revolution

One revolution of the earth around the sun
One more job till the day is done
One more fight
One more tear
One more day- don't live in fear
One revolution of the moon around the earth
One more log on the fiery hearth
One more push
One more pull
One more person and my life is full
One revolution of my world around me
One more time until I'm free
One more brush
One more breath
One more day to outlive death
One revolution of my soul around life
One more pass of the reapers knife
One more touch
One more glance
One more minute to the end of the dance
Life.
My revolution.

Comments

[lucileec]

nope. i hadn't even thought of that. thanks for the compliment! wink

[I screwed Princess Peach]

it was really great. was this supposed to be about a vampire? just asking.