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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 11:41 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 11:43 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 12:09 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 3:12 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 4:01 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 4:04 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 4:17 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2016 4:26 pm
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Most of the time, when I make my characters I have them in mind first, and then go find pictures. I don't usually know who they are or where they come from. But for this one I worked backwards, and I don't feel completely on my game to be honest. I re wrote the personalty and bio about 5 times each. I was thinking about giving it another re write, but I was feeling like I was obsessing over the details too much, and your post said "Go for it" so I was kinda like, what the hell, I'll throw it out there.
The bio is a far departure from undertale, and I think when I get to writing for him, his personalty will really come into it's own. He's a chill guy like sans, but he's more rude, reserved, and romantic. Under it he is super princely romantic too.
I gave him a sax, because I am a very musical person, and I have always wanted to play the saxophone. My parents wouldn't let me when I was a kid cause they said I was too stupid to handle all the buttons. I can kill it if you think it's too close to San's trombone.
I felt like I needed to pick megalovania for the theme song, but I think heartache is better. I don't know if that matters to you, but it's something I was really torn on.
The only things I am really attached to, is that he's a skeleton that fights with bones. If you are okay with that, I could gut it and write it again. I kinda like his bio too, since I spent a lot of time on it.
Basically, this is my first time writing a character like this, and I understand and agree with your concerns. Just let me know what you want. Like I said, I am still not completely happy with it myself.
(I don't think I can change the way his eyes work without it becoming gross)
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