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Good boy Yuuki


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PostPosted: Sat Apr 01, 2017 9:05 pm
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________________⊰BASIC INFORMATION⊱________________

            »Character name: Ill Ilah
            »Pronunciation of name: Ill Il-ah
            »Character squad: 03
            »Character rank: Leiutenant
            »Sexuality: Attracted to Apeche Helicopter Heterosexual
            »Character age:


                Appearance: 20

                Actual: 130




________________⊰PERSONALITY, TRAITS & BIOGRAPHY⊱________________

            »Characters personality: Illah is playful, honest and lighthearted young man that primarily seeks nothing more than a good fight. He is fairly kind and hospitable to strangers and develops strong bonds of loyalty with his friends. He is weak against people he has lost to becoming quite submissive. When angered Illah usually carries an expressionless face and will mercilessly beat the person responsible for his anger.

            Many people who have witnessed his fighting prowess acknowledge his strength and are terrified of ever engaging in battle with him. However, his ruthlessness and aptitude in killing show the other side of him — deadly, violent, and bloodthirsty. Having been tortured since birth, Illah has been conditioned to possess an extreme tolerance for poison, electricity, and pain. Illah possesses extraordinary agility and strength that makes him a one-man killing machine — definitely not one to be trifled with.
            »Characters likes: Big booty hoes, books, fighting, tobacco products, and rum
            »Characters dislikes: Vegetables, liars, flat a** hoe, and paperwork
            »Fears/Phobia: Boredom
            »Habits: Ill Illah tends to smoke a lot of nicotine contained product regardless of venue.
            »Talents: Capable of cooking minute rice in 58 secondss Extreme tolerance to pain, electricity, and poison. Ill Illah has also mastered the art of assassination at a very young age and are capable of perfect voice mimicking of anybody.
            »Biography:

            Arthur de Artogon was the name Illah was born with. He was born as the middle child to a family of known assassins, the Artogon family. Showing great promise from birth, Arthur followed the traditional Artogon training. He had already mastered many killing techniques at a tender age and was set to be one of the best assassins the family has ever produced. At the age of three, he started his training on tailing other people. He was forced to battle in the wilderness at the age of 6, in which where the family abandoned him there for two years. Having to eat the skin of trees and drinking mud water, Arthur did everything in his power in the wilderness to survive and eventually developed an animal instinct and high resistance to bacteria, germs, and virus alike.

            Arthur divulges that ever since his birth, he has been in constant training for the occupation of a professional assassin. Arthur had spent years trying to perfect unique skills that assassins portray and possess. But bored and tired of killing, Arthur buried hatred for his family led him to an unexpected rebellion against his family resulting the end of Artogon family in the continent. Arthur roamed into a foreign land with no family or friends but he has never given up the idea to survive. Through his darkest time, Arthur has left no choice but to enlist into the military in exchange for food and shelters. During his time in boot-camp, Arthur has broken every military physical record earning him a spot in Ranger, a special force division after he graduates. However, after enlisted and going through the basic training of a Ranger, Arthur learned the true meaning of what a special force is; To kill and leave no survivor. This very motto is contradicting of what Arthur stood belief of. However, a beggar can't be a chooser. After basic training, Arthur and his squadron were sent straight into the battlefield. Aside from him, no one else in the entire squadron has had any experience in real life combat where their life is at stake. Taking the role of Commanding Officer, Arthur dark side took the better of him. His mission at that time is to neutralize all target within the perimeter and leaving no survivor. Doing what he do best, Arthur stripped himself down before entering enemy territory. One might think he is insane, but after he stripped himself down Arthur slashed his own body with the knife he was provided and hiding it in his underwear and wandered into the enemy enclave, bleeding. Before he left, he has told his squadron to set traps around the perimeter and be prepared to open fire.

            " Help, please help me, I spotted the army in the jungle and they took me hostile but I managed to escape, barely" Arthur cried and plead as he approaches an enemy standing guard. " Are you ok?! the man shouted before rushing over to the bleeding stranger. " Don't worry, you're safe now. Point me the direction the enemy is at and I will handle the rest" said the man. With bare strength, Arthur pointed at the direction he came from and fainted. Quickly, the enemy stood forward and took out his walkie talky " This is Hanzo- before he could call in, Arthur, with the knife hidden in his underwear slit his throat open and covered his mouth to muffle the scream. " This is Hanzo, the enemy has been spotted near the north and south side of the perimeter. I repeat, the enemy has been spotted near the north and south side. Said, Arthur, as he mimics the voice of the now dead man.

            Arming himself with his victim weapon, Arthur stopped the bleeding by ripping the enemy clothes apart and wrapped it tightly around his bleeding area to stop it from bleeding. Soon, a loud explosion could be heard from the north and south side of the enemy base as the anthem of war begins to play. Who would have thought that Arthur playing victim act would work? No one, but Arthur. Rushing towards the center with nothing but a few hand-grenades, a gun, a knife, and the walkie talky Arthur took on any enemy that was coming his way.

            As he ventures further into the enemy base, a couple of guards nearby begin to open fire at the first sight of Arthur. With the minds he was equid with, Arthur quickly stopped and using the momentum and velocity to quickly leap and spin into the air before firing his gun killing both enemy with a bullet to their head. Landing perfectly a few feet away from where he started, Arthur once again quickly dashed into the center. " We are being ambushed! It was a trap! All unit falls back and rendezvous at base camp!". How expected. When threaten, mice usually retreat back into the home to protect themselves from intruders at the current state they're in, Arthur enemies are no more than mice trapped in a cage. Quickly, as his enemy gathers back in the base to bring out the big gun, Arthur on his own rushed from the east side while his squadron covers the south and west side. Since there is no possible escape route from the North side, they focused their attack on the rest. " This is Arthur, Commanding Officer of this unit. All members continue to pursue enemy line and force them back into the center. With luck, we can kill them all without wasting much ammunition. Until I have given an order, all members should and shall continue to pursue. If I don't see you out there, I will personally come and kill you myself. That is all" his message to his team was a straight forward one as he speaks through the walkie talky that was set to their own frequency.

            Continuing his pursue, Arthur killed all and every enemy man that he has encountered with swift. He has never stopped running since the beginning, and once he managed to close in on the center base camp, he tossed all his grenades but one unto enemy base and blew the wall open. The shrapnel of the walls acted as a second barrel bomb and killing many within that boundary. At this point, the enemy base now has an open wall on the side of their base.Tossing his one last grenade into the base from the open wall, Arthur managed to kill and an entire room of people from a distance. Again, closing in, Arthur charged straight into the enemy base " All members fire in the hole! Leave no survivor!" He ordered his squadron to bomb the enemy base. However, there is only so much damage a grenade could do. While it could pierce through the outer wall, the center room of the base could be perfectly unharmed due to the distance away from the walls. Since he's already in, Arthur is to see through this mission and kill off any remaining survivor.

            After hours of battling non-stop, Arthur and his squadron managed to emerge as the victorious. " Damage report. Arthur monotone asked as he tries to sparks a cigarette. " All 469 enemy bodies has been counted and confirmed dead. No casualties on our side, Sir!".

            "Let's go home then... Says the white haired male as he lit his cigarette and blew the cancerous smoke up into the air. No matter how excellent one is, fate and destiny often play cruel jokes. As he and his squadron gathered at the empty hall, the General of his army himself appeared. It appears that they're looking for a solution to end a long fought war by taking out their enemy commanding center. And alas, who would have thought that what he and his squadron did was a violation of the treaty that their politician signed while they were on a mission? Now the country need someone to takes the blame, perhaps a group of assassins of unknown history? Maybe the alliance just so happen to kill them in a heavy crossfire? Maybe their face was beyond recognizable after what happened?Who knows? And the name of their leader you ask? Perhaps Ill Ilah an old tongue of False God is the name. But one thing is for sure, Arthur and his squadron are not walking out of this hall tonight alive.

            Life After Death

            Much like any other human, upon death, Ill Illah ended up in Soul Society as a spirit. With all his memory intact, the last thing Ill Illah remembered was gathering at the empty chow hall with his general. Everything from there onward became blank, although he does remember a slight moment where he fought back against an unknown soldier but was momentarily killed afterward through unknown means. Confused, Ill Illah body begin to hurt and ache at where the fatal wounds are at. Which is quite frankly, all of his body since he was shot with barrels of bullets. Not that he remember he was being shot but the pain is one that resembles it. Again, confused, Ill Illah wanders off around the city. Everyone but him is wearing traditional Japnese clothing that dated back way before he was born. Standing out among the crowd with his military uniform, everyone knew instantly that he is new. No one would approach him, is not like they don't have a problem of their own. All but one man approached the newcomer and explained everything. Apparently, he's long dead. All this time...all this time as the ultimate warrior Ill Ilah thought that he would die of old age, but who would have thought that he would die by betrayal. Although resentful, Ill Illah does not hate the fact that he is death. He was never a man of religion yet here he is, in paradise or so they say. Perhaps over here he can start a new life, a life without worry. For years Ill Illah has trained his body after entering Soul Society, his ultimate goal is to join the elite squad of Gotei 13 and earn himself an easy life. But that is not all that he wish, aside from comfort food and shelter, Ill Illah seeks joy in nothing more than a good fight and everyone within the Gotei 13 are strong fighters. With the sheer amount alone, Ill Illah should be able to spend the rest of his day fighting (not to death) everyone and not be bored. Life of a civilian is just not something that he is born to be able to enjoy.

            After training his body, Ill Ilah finally managed to join the elite gotei 13 and was enlisted onto Squad 3, a squad with no particular specialty. Ill Illah hearts is with Squad 11, the legendary front line squad that are filled with ambitious and strong people. But the fact that he is not very good with his sword came into thought when they assigned him his squad. Perhaps, maybe later as he master both his mind and body, he could join them. Or, he could simply just go to Division 11 and fight them. There is still adventures for him, an adventure that can't be told by none other than time.




________________⊰PHYSICAL APPEARANCE⊱________________

            »Characters skin color/ethnicity: Pale || Half-British and Half-Japanese
            »Character height: 6"0
            »Character weight: 187 ilb
            »Character hair color/length/style: White || Short(?) || Layered
            »Reiryoku Color: Vantablack



________________⊰ZANPAKUTO INFORMATION⊱________________

            »Zanpakutō name: Asura
            »Zanpakutō spirit appearance: [x]
            »Zanpakutō sealed form: [x]

            »Shikai status: Mastered
            »Activation incantation: "Asura" [Not required for activation]
            »Released appearance: Upon release, Asura stood 20ft tall behind Ill Illah before disappearing almost instantly after
            »Physical changes: At the point of release, no change would be brought forth towards the outward appearance. However, Ill Illah and his blade will be shrouded in a black aura that makes them appear ominous.

            »Battlefield changes: Upon disappearing, Asura release a bloodthirsty aura and instill fear into his opponents by creating realistic frightening illusions. This is often used as a means to try to scare the opponent, which can cause them to run away or literally get frozen in place by fear. In this way, intimidation can be used to end a confrontation or situation non-violently but it will only work if the opponent is significantly weaker than Ill Illah but it can also be used to startle many powerful fighters. Intimidation is less effective on those who have the "resolve" to put their lives on the line for whatever reason it may be.

            »Abilities:

            Burn:
            During his shikai duration, Ill Illah sword could and would vibrate at an atomic level causing light within the sword to heat up thus boosting its damage and piercing power. The light used for heat could be unleashed as a projectile that is equivalent to 2750°F of concentrated hot air. This technique can only be used 3 times a fight, require 3 posts cool down and 1 post charge up. After releasing the compressed light, the sword would no longer shine and burn. But instead, reduced back into its normal state. Once this technique has been released up to its limit, the blade could no longer charge up and therefore no longer capable of passive boost.

            Adapt:
            Primary ability of his shikai is to increase Ill Illah overall speed stats. While in shikai state, Ill Illah is capable of traveling slightly faster than the average shunpo making attacks hard to land. The best time clocked for Ill Illah using adapt are 700mph, can be used however many time he wishes but required one post cool down before he can do so again.

            Coup De Cero
            By gathering and absorbing light to the center of his palm, Ill Illah is capable of firing a concentrated light beam from his palm that resemblance a cero attack. Although the natural color of light is white (not really), this attack in tinted in vantablack making it extremely if not, almost hard to see during the night. This are concentrated light particles in which when hit can cause serious damage to whatever it comes in contact with. Ill Illah can control the spread of the attack, limiting it to a single person or covering an extremely wide area up to 700 ft radius. [12 uses] [1 post cooldown]

            »Bankai status: Experience
            »Activation incantation: "True Essence: Phase 2"
            »Appearance: Remains the same
            »Physical changes: [ ● ] Upon entering Bankai, Ill Illah undergo complete physical change as shown in the picture. During Bankai, Asura is no longer bound to a physical form but became an essence that fused with Ill Illah and granting him a physical boost. From the original lean-muscular, Ill Illah became bulky-muscular who stood tall at 10"11 with horns that grew upward into the sky measuring at 12 inches each. Not only does he undergo a physical change, Ill Illah after fused with Asura no longer bears emotion of any sort and thus granting him a clear mind that is more efficient than usual.
            »Battlefield changes: Nature fear evil. No matter the weather, once Ill Illah enters Bankai the clouds would turn gray and covers up the sky, blocking out any oncoming radiance that the environment might provide making the entire battlefield looking ominous.
            »Abilities:

            Cruel Sun:
            This ability allows Ill Illah to manipulate and create ultraviolet light within 1000 feet radius at will. Such as the sun, radiate ultraviolet light has extreme surface temperatures up to 40,000 degrees Celsius / 72,000 degrees Fahrenheit. Capable of vaporizing almost anything instantly. Without the proper technique, protective gear, and or any other effective means. Continues exposure to ultraviolet light can lead up Sunburn (Erythema), tanning, premature Aging of the Skin, suppression of the immune System, Eye Damage and, Skin Cancer. While this skill is in play, Ill Illah body would burn at 1800 Fahrenheit making continue usage extremely dangerous for him. Although bareable, Ill Illah could only hold or use this technique no more than 5 posts until he further trained his body to do so. [5 post limit] [10 post cooldown]


            Dung Beatle Build:
            Through Asura essence, Ill Illah physical ability has been boosted up significantly. During Bankai, Ill Illah strength is that equivalent of a dung beatle and is capable of lifting 1,100 times of its own weight. Capable of crushing rocks and bones with his bare hands, anyone with stats below 200 are not advised to take him on without proper gear and or protection.

            Adapt v2:
            Much like adapt, this one is significantly faster. Clocking at 1,300 mph, Ill Illah is almost impossible to catch without the right technique and or footwork.

            »Duration: 5



________________⊰Kidō⊱________________

            »Field of Study: Hadō
            »Bakudō:
            - Up tp Gochūtekkan
            »Hadō:
            - Knows all spell
            »Kaidō
            - N/A



________________⊰Combat⊱________________

            »Field of Study: Hakuda

            Hakudo
            - Knows all skill
            »Zanjutsu
            - Expert Zanjutsu (Enough to know how to swing one properly)
            »Hohō:
            - Knows all skill



________________⊰Extra⊱________________


            »Characters possessions: Cigeratte, lighters, kiseru, koiki tobacco, and matches.
            »Stats: 350


yummguk
I believe everything is in place
 
PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2017 11:36 am
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                Hello and welcome to the guild! Glad to see you're gotten down to the approval section. Ill jump right into it.

                Your character is really well written, just have some minor issues, thats about it. Related to your bio, it sounds as if it's written before he became a shinigami. If that's true, you'll need a little info on how he came about in the Soul Society. If not, perhaps change the Ranger to solder and state what division you previously were in.

                I love the concept of your Zanpakuto and it virtually has no flaws, simple ones like post limits. For Coup De Cero it's going to need a limit since it is pretty powerful. Id say post limit 10-13. Cool down can be one instead of two.

                For your bankai, Cruel Sun, the limit is going to have to be 3-5. 72,00 degrees Fahrenheit would burn someone to nothing in an instant, theres no way you can have such a power and use it so frequently. Body burns at 1800 Fahrenheit.

                And lastly your general duration, for starter, is going to have to be 5. It is rare to have a Lieutenant have bankai. But yours is well written so I believe you'll do well.

                So with that all said, once you quote me back with the changes and I'll start setting up your little fight. ^^

                EDIT Everything checks out. You can proceed to the fight.



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