- Title: chapter 2 page 6 of "sakumi"
- Artist: hikaoru29
- Description: its the two sadistic characters but romantic ones on my manga made for my best friend titled "sakumi"
- Date: 04/11/2009
- Tags: chapter page sakumi
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- hikaoru29 - 04/19/2009
- thank you very muhc, for giving me advice, yeah, i know, it looks a little flat and crossed eyes, hard to focus XD
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- IllnessPavillion - 04/18/2009
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-them a little depth.
Okay, part two, things I like!
1. Thier outfits are BEAUTIFUL. So elegant! 2. The detail in the flowers makes it look even more romantic. ^///^ 3. The setting and detail in it looks so beautiful. You don't want to look away.
You could go far, kid. ^^ I could help you if you wish. You got my vote. - Report As Spam
- IllnessPavillion - 04/18/2009
- Lookin good, kid. Are you plannin on doin it for a livin? I've been drawing stuff like that for a LONG time, so I'll give you a few tips. 1. Your characters look just a little cross-eyed. I did that alot too. Make thier eyes focus on one spot instead of at thier nose. 2. Work on shadowing. I have a feeling those two would look very elegant with shadows, and it'll give depth to your settings. 3. Work on fore-shortening. They look a little flat and if you want any character to stand out, give-
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