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  • One shot Comic
  • Title: One shot Comic
  • Artist: flor03
  • Description: A one shot comics of my favorite characters...
  • Date: 09/01/2012
  • Tags: shot comic
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • Viviane_neechan - 10/02/2012
  • I LOVE the poses, and you did a great job filling the page and making your frames so that the eye travels over the comic like you want.

    My only suggestions are that you practice your anatomy of hands and faces, and try to lighten up on the lines in her hair (to make them look more organic).

    It's clear that you put a LOT of work into this--5/5!
 
 
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