- by auntie luna |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 09/10/2008 |
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- Title: Lunar Death
- Artist: auntie luna
- Description: This is an avi art i did of my avatar titled 'Lunar Death' which is in the arenas. give me your opinions? also how much would you pay for this? i sell avi art. just PM me.
- Date: 09/10/2008
- Tags: lunar death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Miserblood - 09/11/2008
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You additionally need to add more color/shading to the eyes, they are flat and very boring. Also, you need to work on shading the hair, it (like the face) is way too flat. Remember, hair is composed of locks and strands, it's not just a shape on your head.
Other than that, you did great!!!!!! You are AMAZING with perspective, and the character's form is good too! Keep drawing!!<3 - Report As Spam
- Miserblood - 09/11/2008
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you need more shadows/color variation on the skin (which, by the way, looks to purple-y/stereotypically lavender). Her face looks very flat, which looks horrible with the shading of the hair and the depth/detail of the background. (continued on next comment)
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- aoiki moon - 09/11/2008
- ....it's not too bad, I would probably give you 2k though...
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- zakk_6797 - 09/11/2008
- cute pic
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