- by Zinra Yaminaki |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: Zinrath
- Artist: Zinra Yaminaki
- Description: this is one of my first guy drawings just constructive critisism please
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: zinrath
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Quasar Quirks - 07/24/2009
- What I find works best it to either have someone hold up a hand, and draw the same pose from different angles so you can understand the structure, or take pictures to reference later. I also agree with Blah below, folds on clothes are hard, but add depth and personality to a character. Also the leg on the left looks bent awkwardly, but that goes in with the anatomy. I see real potential, just keep practicing, and you'll be great for sure!
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- Quasar Quirks - 07/24/2009
- Very good on the facial features, in portraying an emotion throughout the whole face. Good hair, although add some highlights and shadows to give it texture. Anatomy needs a little work. The arm on the right (his left) should end somewhere along his thigh, just below the crotch area. (Yes, I said it, let's all be mature here.) Try practicing your hands.
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- xxblah_girlxx - 12/28/2008
- It looks flat so work on clothing folds (I know I hate it too but it's worth it to practice!) I like the hair.
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- Griffin-Rose 7 - 12/10/2008
- it doesn't look that bad.
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