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  • Title: Free Spirit
  • Artist: leavyn
  • Description: I'm submitting this into the art literary magazine at my school.

    Sadly my scanner is less than half the size of the original picture so about 60% of this picture was cut off from the scan. So I'm definitely going to submit the original drawing to the magazine.

    Edit;; Yes, her hair is meant to be over exaggerated.

    Criticism is loved. c:
  • Date: 02/08/2009
  • Tags: free spirit
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • leavyn - 02/08/2009
  • Thank you all. c:

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    @ Stone Temple:

    Thanks for pointing that out. I actually may be able to fix that with relining her palm. c:

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    @ nikuya:

    Does it really matter why she is melting?
  • Stone Temple Creep - 02/08/2009
  • I must say, this drawing is (in the words of a good friend of mine) pure awesome.
    I hate criticism like the plague, but there is 1 thing that catches my eye that doesn't look quite right. That would be the palm of the right hand. The lines kind of go up-down when the should be more rounded to illustrate the muscles in the thumb area.
    5/5 (because I love it.)
  • leavyn - 02/08/2009
  • Thank you all. c:

    Yeah, I agree the proportions are really off in this picture.
    It would probably all look a lot better if her hips weren't so wide and her torso was just a bit shorter.

    Though it would be an epic fail to try and fix that now. Dx
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