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  • Title: Headache
  • Artist: Crimson--Assassination
  • Description: this is just a rough sketch of a random guy, no its not from any anime, and please do not be rude when commenting,
    Thanks

    PS *i rededited this, it still the same pic, if ya can't tell then I don't know, but I tried to tidy it up a bit because the original was too sketchy and made it look sloppy, so if anyone sees this, yeah tried my best to correct what was a horrible pic to begin with, Oh and this is the original color.*
  • Date: 03/10/2009
  • Tags: headache
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Phoenix fire flower - 06/01/2009
  • *faint* proportions.... *muttering*.... humunahumunahumunahumuna.... work on the anatomy a lot... and proportions.... practice makes perfect
  • Crimson--Assassination - 03/14/2009
  • To all of you who've commented, thanks, I understand what your all saying and honestly I absolutely hate this pic and I agree that it's one of my worst ones I've ever drawn, I only posted it because a friend kept asking me too. All your guys' criticism is fine and appreciated, I've read some really horrible comments on other artwork people have submitted and that's what I meant by not being rude, criticism is fine, jerky and crude comments not. Thanks again for the criticism.
  • Drake Ducaste - 03/14/2009
  • Jesus, this is... this is pretty bad.
    Not gonna lie.
    Never ask for people to not be rude, because that is inevitable when -real- art critics like myself are online. I'm not going to address every little problem right now, but just know that his hair and hand are pretty awful.
    His face is too large, too, it looks stretched and out of shape.
  • Shiro-Jin - 03/14/2009
  • Hmm, maybe he's a Lycanthrope and is allergic to silver! xD That would definitely be a headache! If you dn't mind, I'd like to critique you a bit. I know you said it was a sketch, but the lines are almost too sketchy and it makes the image look kind of sloppy, and the proportions are off measurably as well. Overall it's not half bad! I would suggest you sharpen your skill and persue this because I imagine you could get very good and maybe make a name for yourself. That's what i'm tryin' to do!<3
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