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  • Title: Girl and her bird
  • Artist: Crimson Ninja Ai
  • Description: I took a picture of this girl while in bush gardens and i redrew it but when i scanned it looks not nearly as good- its fuzzy and not well defined especially in the hair, the contrast, and the darks escpecailly are pratically non-existant and the bird does not look nearly as beautiful, but, nonetheless i will submit it anyway, please tell me what you think.

    PS: This is for my portfolio for College credit! So CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISIZUM IS LOVED AND NEEDED!!!! THANK YOU!
  • Date: 05/03/2009
  • Tags: girl bird cute graphite colorpencil
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Stinatardis - 12/03/2013
  • The girl's face is where nightmares are made
    but for srs, i think it looks good except the eyes. the eyes are too...idk how to explain it
  • Seldoc - 03/26/2010
  • that looks real nice, the bird looks beautfiul and amazing, although the girl's face looks a little odd...
    nice job in general.
    5
  • Sabur Blysmey - 06/02/2009
  • sometimes the scanning makes it not as sharp. if the original is better, you have something good for your porfolio
  • Lilium Ion - 05/25/2009
  • Um..you can always correct the lights and darks digitally. Usually you can do that with scanner software or you can get a photo editing program like Photoshop. Scanning at high resolutions like 300px/inch and then resizing for print/web pages helps too.
  • Essence of Amber - 05/10/2009
  • yeah i agree with Hellbent_demon_Alucard i can only draw anime better than something i would do, the bird is amazing...the girl uhh she's uhhh...anyway great job!
  • Challenger Aselleus - 05/10/2009
  • k, you did wonderful wonderful on the bird. but the girl's expression is scary....like she's gonna end up eating it alive...

    or me even ;_;
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