- by Takanaru Kodou |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/08/2009 |
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- Title: SImple Manga Girl
- Artist: Takanaru Kodou
- Description: A simple manga(i fixed it >.>) girl i drew i know its not that good so plz tell me whut i could improve
- Date: 06/08/2009
- Tags: simple manga girl
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Comments (7 Comments)
- City of the Moon - 02/06/2010
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I'm not trying to be a jerk in any way at all, but you could work on it all.
The ears a bit too low- in my opinion.
The arm looks really, what's the word... squiggly?
Head's a bit too big for the body, try to fix that.
I'm not going to go on, and remember, I'm not being a jerk, I am but offering constructive criticism, but you're well on your way. ;D
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- Knt_Stop_Me - 10/14/2009
- i looks alrght... just fix the head and ears.
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- PizzaToGo - 06/12/2009
- Haha Someone said my name! that's pretty rare XD
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- cutiebetsy - 06/11/2009
- u should fix the head abit, i agree with Pizzatogo- it kinda too big..
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- Hesper Moon - 06/11/2009
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Technically speaking the title should be "Simple Manga Girl", cuz she was drawn, not animated.
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- Takanaru Kodou - 06/09/2009
- yea well ii just started draiwn so...i realized the arms were messed up i just didnt feel like fixing it...cuz im lazy and besides i wouldve made them worse o.O
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- QTgirl1474 - 06/09/2009
- i like the hair. and the blank look in the eyes makes her look broken inside. very cool. the torso might need a little work and her arms r a little wrong but still, very cool. i really think its cool. smile
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