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  • Melancholy Girl
  • Title: Melancholy Girl
  • Artist: Harmonious Dischord
  • Description: My first drawing of a manga shoujo girl. Please critique, comment, and tell me what I need to do to fix.

    Please ignore the lines across the page as I did have to fold it, and please ignore the bottom portion of the hair. XP I still have to work on that.

    Media was pencil and paper. ^_^ No alterations made on photoshop.
  • Date: 11/15/2009
  • Tags: melancholy girl manga shoujo
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Nyu0u - 11/18/2009
  • buen intento me gusta que trates de dibujar manga ^ - ^
    pero te voy a dar un consejo, primero sombrea los ojos como si fueran burbujas y las cejas no deven estar rectas e iguales, para que esten chibi pon la de abajo mas chica que la de arriba que es grande y extendida hacia la derecha.Traduce esto si quieres leer X3
  • xoxCutiepiex - 11/15/2009
  • this is 100% good for your first... i couldn't even do that good on my first... i use to just draw circles for heads .... i improved
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