- by Harmonious Dischord |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/15/2009 |
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- Title: Melancholy Girl
- Artist: Harmonious Dischord
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Description:
My first drawing of a manga shoujo girl. Please critique, comment, and tell me what I need to do to fix.
Please ignore the lines across the page as I did have to fold it, and please ignore the bottom portion of the hair. XP I still have to work on that.
Media was pencil and paper. ^_^ No alterations made on photoshop. - Date: 11/15/2009
- Tags: melancholy girl manga shoujo
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Xx_Forgetting Tomorrow_xX - 07/06/2010
- Perhaps have her body facing the same way as her head?
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- Nyu0u - 11/18/2009
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buen intento me gusta que trates de dibujar manga ^ - ^
pero te voy a dar un consejo, primero sombrea los ojos como si fueran burbujas y las cejas no deven estar rectas e iguales, para que esten chibi pon la de abajo mas chica que la de arriba que es grande y extendida hacia la derecha.Traduce esto si quieres leer X3 - Report As Spam
- xoxCutiepiex - 11/15/2009
- this is 100% good for your first... i couldn't even do that good on my first... i use to just draw circles for heads .... i improved
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