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  • Title: Leone
  • Artist: Raven Zaphiere
  • Description: I nid constructive critisism and comments on how I can improve my drawing and coloring. Whether good or bad comments are appreciated.

    I colored this using photoshop and a mouse(cant afford a tablet) If you have any links on tutorials I would really appreciate it XD
  • Date: 12/05/2009
  • Tags: leoneassassin
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • Starke Haz - 12/08/2009
  • Well, I think you are in the right path. Your skills are already quite good!
    As a tip, I suggest you to practice doing hair. Adding some hair strands here and there instead of relying only on the countours always help giving more volume and depth.
    But you are already doing just fine! If you'd like, I can send you some tutorials. Just ask for them in DA: http://starke-haz.deviantart.com
  • Cloud Acolyte - 12/06/2009
  • Impressive. ^-^ Not amazing at art myself, so I can't give any criticism's without the proper training .. Maybe, if you get really nitty-gritty, I suppose I could say the angle in which the butt of the sword is drawn seems a little off compared to the angle in which the finger is drawn when it comes to the grip... Again, I may be wrong, not to mention the resolution of the picture might be throwing my sight off. ^-^

    Fantastic job!
 
 
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