- by Priestess Arianna |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 02/03/2010 |
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- Title: Jordan
- Artist: Priestess Arianna
- Description: Pic by request...just thought I'd put it up here for comments and constructive criticism...not that I ever get any...haha. Anyway, rates? Comments?
- Date: 02/03/2010
- Tags: jordan caitlin sketch
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sirena Eri - 02/07/2010
- He looks cute but his shoulders need to be more broad. but other wise I like it!
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- Priestess Arianna - 02/03/2010
- Thank you! Finally, someone with good advice biggrin
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- PinkFairyPatience - 02/03/2010
- Wow Jordan, I couldn't draw like that. Here's my two cents: Adjust the angle of the collarbones and add definition by shading. Shading adds 3d quality. Also, this is a man so the shoulders need to be broader in width. The shoulders need to be lower and add the arm pits. The face and hair is proportionate and styled. THe hair shading is wonderfully done. Hope this helps!
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