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  • Title: barajou no kiss
  • Artist: rEdBLoOdY_rOSe1
  • Description: i just sorta copied the face of some cover of the manga,made up the rest and yeah....the writing took AGES to do.

    plz comment and plz tell me any tips or tell me anything i did wrong :)
  • Date: 07/24/2010
  • Tags: barajou kiss
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • bmangaman - 07/24/2010
  • first of all, the writing looks great. can tell you put some time and effor into that... but if if you some real tips...

    the proportions are off...
    and due to the lack of shading or coloring... it seems a little bland
    and its kinda obvious you took the face from a cover cuz it doesnt match the rest of the picture's style

    otherwise, its a nice pic. the overall situation, position, and idea are really good. if you keep on practicing you could get really good!
 
 
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