- by Cazumi Yamitano |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 09/26/2010 |
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- Title: Avi art: M u n z i k i i
- Artist: Cazumi Yamitano
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Description:
This is an avi art of my cousin's avi M u n z i k i i
Please comment on how i can improve or what you think about it
and rate :3 - Date: 09/26/2010
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Comments (6 Comments)
- dojafart - 02/23/2015
- You show potential, so far your proportions look pretty good. The only thing that bothers me is the right elbow (her left) is really skinny and longer than the other one, if you were going for the effect that she's leaning forward on it then it definitely needs to look a little bigger. The blue lines in the hair needs a more natural fluid direction. Like where the hair actually starts at the follicles and how it would actually fall even if styled. Other than that, it looks pretty good. 4/5
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- Cazumi Yamitano - 10/05/2010
- thank you! and yea, i know her arms are kinda messed up, but i realized it when i had already finished coloring, but next time, ill make sure that the arms are good
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- Shiranui Ookami Amaterasu - 10/05/2010
- the elbows and lower arms are a bit thin so 5/5 alround i realy like your picture!
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- Flush Of Fuchsia - 09/28/2010
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i like it nice coloring 4/5
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- Cazumi Yamitano - 09/28/2010
- =D ty
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- Heart Eyez - 09/27/2010
- tht is so cool and pretty!!!
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