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  • Title: Peace
  • Artist: Tenten-chan96
  • Description: Yes, it's another elf. Well, actually, she was a fairy, but I decided to clip the wings off. This is titled "peace" because her expression's supposed to be kinda peaceful and happy. Anyways, I want to know if I should give a shot at coloring this. And, before I do, I need to know what to change and how proportions are and what not. So please give me your opinion, Gaia! Thank you! ^_^
  • Date: 12/18/2010
  • Tags: elve manga earth peace happy
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Tenten-chan96 - 12/20/2010
  • Even twelve-year-olds have opinions, no need to worry about that. Thank you so much for the criticism! I could consider the mouth, but the hair was purposely made big, 'cause she's supposed to have puffy hair. I could thin it out at the bottom though. Again, thank you for you opinions! ^_^
  • iginnett - 12/20/2010
  • my opinion: i would draw the mouth a little higher so she doesn't give the impression that she has a long face. also, i think her hair needs to be a little less puffy. i love the eyes, and how you did your face. but that's just from a twelve year old so...
 
 
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