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  • Title: The White Guardian
  • Artist: AquaBless
  • Description: Xara is one of the Five Guardian n her task is to guard one of the most powerful treasure and to give it to the right person. She's wild n a popular prankster (is the main reason why she was punish to guard the treasure when she was caught while setting up traps for a deity). Its a tiresome job but she always have fun with her companian Ed, the white imp, to bully... i mean to test the knights that came to her.
  • Date: 11/26/2008
  • Tags: white deity knight
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • koolaidlove x3 - 12/02/2008
  • i love your avatar. it looks really rich powerful and beautiful. biggrin i love the story. it goes well with your avi. very interesting ^^ (honest okay) but i hope that one thing in your avi has a different color out of all the colors in your avi to catch the audience eye smile . overall its good biggrin
  • AquaBless - 12/01/2008
  • ^^lol when i sent the avatar.. I wasnt thinking much.. Ok few points taken.. i notice abt the hair too well today...I wasnt intended to match with green gemstones. I will try harder on the next avi. ^^Thanx Cobalt for ur comment.
  • Cobalt Heaven - 12/01/2008
  • Hmmm, let's see...

    Well, the background story is alright. Critiqued strictly for it's literary merit, I'd say that the idea for the story was pretty could, however the execution could use a bit of work.

    As for the avi, I love the theme going on here, however I think the hair could maybe get changed up, both in color and in style (I understand that it matches the green gemstones on the necklace, but still...). Something a tad more extravagant, to better suit the style of a royal deity.
  • Wut r you - 12/01/2008
  • like the contrast of ur avi ..but there is sumthin definitely missin from it..cant put my finger on it...but i wud give u a 5 outta 5...nice job whee
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