- by shinju kumagai |
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- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: Bright Eyed Shroud
- Artist: shinju kumagai
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Description:
Darkness entombs her feminine shape
as she huddles in the bleak shrouding mist.
Once she could have been been beautiful.
Behind her closed eyes she could be dreaming
or perhaps lingering on bitter times.
What is this?
Her eyes flutter open;
just like two pinpricks of light,
stars in the night.
Her heart pounds.
What can she possibly see?
Is it you? or is it me?
Watch as her golden heart acends
while leaving behind her body
cold and still.... - Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: bright eyed shroud poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Danny_is_the_king - 12/16/2008
- SWEET 88888/5!
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- -wo_zai_xiang_ni- - 12/16/2008
- Hey! you did exellent!! 9999999/9999999 XD great ^^
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- XM The SpeedRunner - 12/16/2008
- Wow, that's awesome! On a scale of 1 to 5, I'd give this a 10! XD 10/5 biggrin
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- Prince of reapers - 12/16/2008
- wow my gaia mommy is pretty screw 5/5 you desrve a 10000000000/10000000000
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- minaroo - 12/16/2008
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wow... like the story~
so love it! 5'd ^^ - Report As Spam
- Siir Snuggles - 12/09/2008
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Wow deep o.O
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- Nikkisherrow - 12/09/2008
- very nice
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