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  • Title: waiting in the rain
  • Artist: olive in luv
  • Description: well this reminds me of someone waiting for their love in the rain!!!!
    i think this because she has water on her and she has a scarf and some rain boots!!!!
    she seems like she is waiting for someone she cares about because she has a heart baloon!!!!!!!
    this whole styal is totaly not me but it looks ok soi just want to know what others think of it!!
    please don't be to harsh!!!
    i love comments on what you think!
  • Date: 01/08/2009
  • Tags: waiting love
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Chat Error - 01/16/2009
  • I agree with Looneygirl..you don't need the !!!!! at the end of every sentence and yes lose the balloon it takes a way from the story you are trying to create. Good luck
  • Elisahh - 01/16/2009
  • u dont have to do !!!! at the end of every sentence. And its way too plain 1/5 good luck?!!?
  • Bronia - 01/12/2009
  • i think its way too simple, the heart ballon makes her look like she just came from the county fair! she'd look like she was waiting for someone without the ballon, maybe if you added that cupid item it'd work better
 
 
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