- Title: The Taste of Temptation
- Artist: Helessa
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Description:
The cerulean serpent descended the garden,
Slithering down the great tree.
Dressed in her best to convey the temptation,
Of the apple she offered to me.
Take but one bite of my gift this night,
It will slake all your hungers within.
But I would know hunger like never before,
As scales turned into soft skin.
Oh venemous lie! Now what must I try,
To keep my dark hunger at bay?
She whispered "Have more." pointing down at the core.
"It just takes an apple a day." - Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: lotus padmavatis naga serpent tail
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Comments (7 Comments)
- An Unexpected Song - 01/29/2009
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FINALLY A DECENT AVI!
also LOVE your use of the Titans seed
and a wonderful descrip?!
AMAZING JOB
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- Shattered Spectrum - 01/29/2009
- oooh! I like it!!! Finally, a good avi!! AND a poem!! yay!
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- RaikuMori - 01/28/2009
- i really really like this avi. it's amazing! i especially love the description. it makes the avi (which is worth at least a 4 by itself) into one worth like an 9 or ten. (yes i know the scale doesn't go that far, but for this it should) it LOVE it when people have really good descriptions. 5/5 and a favorite from me.
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- Pravus Angelus - 01/28/2009
- Ooo!! O_O pretty! 5
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- Thishe - 01/28/2009
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this deserves to make the top 10
you get 5 from me
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- mikethepuzzler - 01/27/2009
- pretty cool give a 4
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- +Dominus-Schwarzwald+ - 01/27/2009
- Interesting, artistic, and well-executed. This is a good avi. 5/5.
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