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- | Submitted on 03/18/2009 |
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- Title: humility of the unfortunate.
- Artist: Archangel_Icarus
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Description:
a 7 year old boy was raised by his mother.
thieves broke in their house & killed her.
he became a stray & asks for food but no one helped.
during the night people were in their homes.
but the poor boy was on the street battling hunger & cold.
he touched his heirloom & saw a vision
of his mother & embraced her
& wishes that it may never end &
not to leave him again.
a news spread about a
lifeless body of a little boy.
it seems that he is in a place
far away from cold, hunger & pain. - Date: 03/18/2009
- Tags: humility unfortunate poor
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Comments (7 Comments)
- I B HiPeR - 03/28/2009
- wow dude i like that story 5/5 ^^
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- Deithone - 03/28/2009
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woah wat a great description!!! eek
u know wat, u made an impact to me. cry
u can touch lives & i can see that ur future
is to be a famous novelist sumday. 3nodding
i'm very impresSed of this entry
& u deserve to win this competition. mrgreen - Report As Spam
- ganda ka teh - 03/28/2009
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well i hate noObs but this one has a great story.
very tragic & u hav a potential to be william shakesphere. 3nodding goOdluck dude. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- 2GIRLZ_1CUP - 03/28/2009
- oh mah gush wut ah vhery shad stohreh. 5/5!!!!!
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- dainty shawtie - 03/27/2009
- 5/5
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