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- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: Luna
- Artist: DokutokunobananaTwilight
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Description:
She sits in the rain,
Nothing to lose, nothing to gain.
She smiles and laughs,
Forces tears not to come and pass,
She really wants to die,
She feels trapped inside.
No friends to talk too,
because they'll stab right through.
Her heart is fragile, so soft so weak,
She wears a hard shell, so it can't peak.
So she sits in the rain,
Nothing to lose, nothing to gain.
She wonders if she'll ever be happy again.
This is my 6th avi submitted. Please give me your honest opinion respectfully. - Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: luna black rain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Annasay - 04/19/2009
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I hate the shoes and the mouth.
Everything else is pretty good.
Doubt it will win though.
3/5 - Report As Spam
- DokutokunobananaTwilight - 04/13/2009
- Thanks!!! ^-~
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- ii_StraitRose_11 - 04/13/2009
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i like it n i was the first to somment woot! biggrin
but yes nice avitar and nice poem it sexy :] - Report As Spam
