- Title: A tune for the lonely
- Artist: nuo
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Description:
Her skins as white as ivory,
her voice is sweet and pure.
For all the pains she's suffered,
her spirit still endured.
The path to heaven behind her,
a wounded world ahead.
Her goal in this eternity,
to heal those wounds instead.
She strums her harp silently,
a melody on the breeze.
She hopes it finds the weary,
and calms their souls with ease.
She knows her time's already come,
she she can't leave just now.
To her the world's an empty stage,
and she still has yet to bow. - Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: tune eternity poem bard holy
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shadows Autumn - 04/28/2009
- This won because it's innovative and plus with that well written poem, it shows you put some effort into this and wasn't just hoping for a quick chance at some gold. :3
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- nuo - 04/27/2009
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Thanks for all the constructive criticism. I'm actually surprised this even placed at all.
Seriously. How did this win 7th? O_o
But, regardless, thanks for inflating my ego a little. - Report As Spam
- Mizu Tsubaki - 04/26/2009
- This is pretty cool.
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- virgogirl17 - 04/26/2009
- wow!!!!!!!! i love it!!! if i could i would rate you a 100/100
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- Nadjaimi - 04/26/2009
- cool!
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- Azume-chan - 04/26/2009
- My thoughts exactly, teddy. Hasn't something similar like this won before? Too simple for my taste.
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- Quit - bye bye - 04/25/2009
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i love this how did it not win!
WTF . - Report As Spam