- by vipermouse |
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- | Submitted on 07/06/2009 |
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- Title: combat romeo
- Artist: vipermouse
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Description:
born from a contract between Lucifer and a mortal is romeo who unknowingly made a contract with another mortal for her soul after a near death experience but little by little hes falling for his contracty but him falling in love is forbiddin due to that if a demon loves he weakens and one day falls but he doesnt no if he should follow that rule cuz hes half breed so now wonders wat would happen
(ps i no this story needs major work but im tryin) - Date: 07/06/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Luna Girl Heather - 07/20/2009
- it might be just me but having too much is not good. try having a little less in the background without that its great
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- iUchiha Chibi - 07/20/2009
- bad >:I
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- smilelmao - 07/19/2009
- a little cluttered, and the stuff together makes no sense... still it works. 4/5
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- All The Lovely Bad Ones - 07/18/2009
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RUN ON SENTENCE! MULTIPLE SPELLING FAILURES! CLUTTERED AVI!
Work on it and come back later. 2/5 - Report As Spam
- Chiiaroscuro - 07/16/2009
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needs more coherency. there's a lot of stuff going on here and it's a bit of a mess.
3/5 - Report As Spam
- K i k i H o r i z o N - 07/16/2009
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5/5 ^^
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- ConsummateCaricature - 07/15/2009
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I like it ^^ But the bunny(?) Kind of made me go "...huh??"
5/5
Rate back??
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