- by Jisatsu Ketsueki |
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- | Submitted on 07/16/2009 |
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- Title: Twisted Angel
- Artist: Jisatsu Ketsueki
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Description:
We lurk within the shadows,
often sought but never seen.
Through the centuries of darkness,
and the slaughters in-between.
I've sacrificed a thousand souls,
but could not change their fate.
And though I've begged to save them all,
a thousand others wait.
A tainted tear will fall for you,
as you fight to keep afloat.
But I'll hold you like a frightened child,
before ripping out your throat.
*Poem by me; Do NOT steal* - Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: twisted angel suicide sacrifice fate
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Gillford - 04/19/2010
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yer awesome hun!
~.^
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- RainbowKitty - 07/26/2009
- love the avi
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- maeora - 07/26/2009
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ah great poem.
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- Ellectric Eccentric - 07/25/2009
- The last stanza was AMAZING. so was the Avi, 5/5
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- Jisatsu Ketsueki - 07/25/2009
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The poem goes WITH the avatar, it's not a Mary Sue. People judge how they want, whether they want to go by the avatar or the description. I'm proud of my avatar, and how it mingles with the description. That was my purpose here after all.
Just because you can't exactly comprehend that doesn't mean you have to take it out on me. - Report As Spam
- All The Lovely Bad Ones - 07/24/2009
- Mary sue! It's okay if you put a poem in the description but when people rate based on that you know your avatar sucks.
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- Darkya-chan - 07/23/2009
- Go for it Twisted :3 i like the poem x3 and of course ur avi x3
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