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  • Title: Moon Controler
  • Artist: Atilius Devoncroix
  • Description: a man on the moon
    he stands up there all day in the cold dark sky just as the moon its self
    he controls the patern of the moons
    and he is lonly and cold just as the moons
    all he can do is stand there and do his job
    nobody to care for , no one to care for him
    everyone can see his moon but no one see's him
    and the reson for a new moon is so no one see's the tears fall from the moon as the controler weeps
    all he dose is stand and do his job but no one cares
  • Date: 08/13/2009
  • Tags: moon controler
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Tprinces - 08/23/2009
  • oooh... very nice ^^ i like the pale blue mixed in with the black and white. good monochromatic scheme going on there...
  • Sir Nubbins - 08/18/2009
  • Too much blatant and over stated angst. The description just makes me want to go 'Waaah.'
    The trick to making something sad without making it an irritating puddle of sob slop is to allude to it without saying (and definitely not more than once) flat out that he's sad.
    Avatar's not too bad, though, so 3/5.
  • S in fu ll S ec re t - 08/17/2009
  • I love the avi, as do I also like the description but your being way to redundant. Repeating the same thing over and over. We know he stands up there on the moon, we know he is cold, we no one cares.
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