- by Atilius Devoncroix |
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- | Submitted on 08/13/2009 |
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- Title: Moon Controler
- Artist: Atilius Devoncroix
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Description:
a man on the moon
he stands up there all day in the cold dark sky just as the moon its self
he controls the patern of the moons
and he is lonly and cold just as the moons
all he can do is stand there and do his job
nobody to care for , no one to care for him
everyone can see his moon but no one see's him
and the reson for a new moon is so no one see's the tears fall from the moon as the controler weeps
all he dose is stand and do his job but no one cares - Date: 08/13/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- bitter_dissapointment - 08/23/2009
- 4/5
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- Tprinces - 08/23/2009
- oooh... very nice ^^ i like the pale blue mixed in with the black and white. good monochromatic scheme going on there...
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- gerard salanga - 08/21/2009
- nice avi 5/5
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- Sir Nubbins - 08/18/2009
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Too much blatant and over stated angst. The description just makes me want to go 'Waaah.'
The trick to making something sad without making it an irritating puddle of sob slop is to allude to it without saying (and definitely not more than once) flat out that he's sad.
Avatar's not too bad, though, so 3/5. - Report As Spam
- S in fu ll S ec re t - 08/17/2009
- But I give you a 5/5 You did a great job on the avi ^^
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- S in fu ll S ec re t - 08/17/2009
- I love the avi, as do I also like the description but your being way to redundant. Repeating the same thing over and over. We know he stands up there on the moon, we know he is cold, we no one cares.
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- Vyudali - 08/17/2009
- 5/5 Definitely.
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