- Title: Cracked Porcelain
- Artist: Adoracia
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Description:
The doll lies still and broken
Whitewashed curls dusty
As if brushed by moonbeams
Eyes so dark glistening
Like beetles in the night
A tattered dress clinging
Like shadows and bats
Drinking from the cracks
In porcelain skin
A toy left forgotten
Abandoned like so many
Shattered dreams
The poem is called 'Blank Verse' which is why there's no rhyming.
I know that some people look for sets and rate based on that. So to defend myself, this is not a set, although there are some items that are similar. - Date: 08/18/2009
- Tags: broken doll
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Comments (7 Comments)
- pakki - 08/30/2009
- Good theme, but maybe if you put a different dress on her I might have raised the score. 3/5
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- Song of Orpheus - 08/30/2009
- The poem is beautiful and obviously suits the avatar very well. It has a dark sort of enchantment about it. I wish you luck!
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- Vintage Puppet - 08/29/2009
- I love it <333333333
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- Tikiori - 08/29/2009
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I love the poem. It describes the avvy very well. 5*
(Check mine out, if you don't mind... ^^) - Report As Spam
- Merangel19 - 08/29/2009
- Love the avi! biggrin 5/5
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- Kimba Capricorn - 08/28/2009
- Wow, it's really cute, but eerie! I love the Gimpi background. It gives it the illusion of being among more children's toys.
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- xsakura-blossomx09 - 08/28/2009
- realy exelent but kinda creepy nice 5/5
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