- by Casually Cody |
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- | Submitted on 12/26/2009 |
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- Title: Bright Light
- Artist: Casually Cody
- Description: I lie here under a lit up galaxy. The moon's rays pierce my skin staining it a deep ivory. I feel the stars shine upon me as I admire them in silent unspoken passion. I hold the warmth of a single match close to me, listening to it flicker and watching it sway the dance of unfeigned wind. It lights up my face and its warmth seeps into me burning me with the... CONTINUED IN LAST AND THEN 2ND TO LAST COMMENT!
- Date: 12/26/2009
- Tags: bright light moon stars love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- GrimmReapersKeeper - 01/02/2010
- i like it. but the surf board looks out of place. very nice description ^^ 4/5
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- II RainbowWriter IIf - 01/02/2010
- the surf board out or added waves it would look better 4/5 for trying =D
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- Casually Cody - 12/28/2009
- Yea i guess I threw that in there when it wasn't necessary there was just a lot of dead space in the background, I thought i was gonna write about dreams at first and i thought it could fit into the dream part, but since i didn't...yea
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- Rainy Day Mizchyfe - 12/28/2009
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dammit, i always forget how to hyperlink here, gah! DX
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=101914551 - Report As Spam
- Rainy Day Mizchyfe - 12/28/2009
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The prose was lovely, and the avi decent. I am confused as to the purpose of the surfboard though, other than possibly aesthetic balance? I find it somewhat distracting. I am going to have to ponder this before i vote... >.<
Check out mine? XD http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=101914551 - Report As Spam
- Casually Cody - 12/26/2009
- This nightmare lasts an eternity without your love, but I shall never relinquish the bright moon, stars, and flame, for they keep me sane in your absence. I shall live off lifeless objects to replace the irreplaceable love I had always recieved from you.
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