- Title: Sparkling in the night sky
- Artist: S0da-chan
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Description:
As she stood near the dark shimmering lake, her face started to shine.
I stared at the beutiful girl for a long time till she smiled brightly,then winked.
I closed my eyes and she was gone forever.
- Date: 01/20/2010
- Tags: sparkling night
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Heart Mishima - 01/27/2010
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nice 5/5
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- Artistic Joy - 01/27/2010
- OMFG YOUR A DUDE DRESSED LIKE A GIRL IN THIS COSPLAY!!!!!!!!!!LOL 5/5
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- PokuMii - 01/26/2010
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The description is REALLY nice and i LOVE it but i hate the avatar. I dont like it because
1. Your clothes dont really show how "Beautiful" the girl is
2. I think the halo DOESNT have to be there, it doesnt seem to fit along with the description
I'll give you a 2/5. You have a VERY nice description but the Avatar ruins it. :/ - Report As Spam
- Divine_Love7 - 01/26/2010
- i <3 it but maybe it b betta with a flowy dress =D 5/5
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- II Buttercream II - 01/25/2010
- Like the theme and story and everything, but I think it would look better with a dress or skirt or something..Pants seem masculine and this really shouldn't be masculine. Ha Other than that it's good. 4/5
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