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- Title: Tiffany
- Artist: II Renegade II
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Description:
DO NOT IGNORE!
Ahem, thank you. Now, because i had no room for the description here, i want to ask you all to read the very first comment(which belongs to me). It will explain the whole idea of this avi. And yeah, i know it rhymes; at first i did not intended for it to rhyme but...eh, hope its good enough >.< Please rate and comment on how can i improve it please! Thank you :3 - Date: 06/26/2010
- Tags: tiffany ghost little girl scary
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Comments (6 Comments)
- The_Graceful_Nobody - 07/04/2010
- there are no words to describe what i felt when i read your poem...i was glad to be with Tiffany but then again sad about all of the things i woulkd miss in life. damn bravo!
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- PanicSoon - 06/30/2010
- Nice, I love it!
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- Mike_The_Mets_King - 06/30/2010
- Wow...Very interesting! 5/5. And I like the description! No not like, love!
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- Elfrida - 06/28/2010
- WOW!!! so tragically beautiful. and the description is good too ^^ and well coordinated!
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- II Renegade II - 06/26/2010
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But i rose my blank eyes and smile; my scythe whooshes and ends your life. Finally, i have a friend to play with me... My name is Tiffany, and i was only three.
((Inspired from a poem found on some other site)) - Report As Spam
- II Renegade II - 06/26/2010
- Hello. My name is Tiffany and i am alone. Here in a cold house with no one to play. Damned to haunt it for the rest of my days. I am an empty soul, a ghost or a spirit and i am alone. My daddy killed me long ago. I must have been bad, i must have been naughty, or maybe just ugly. He rose his hands and forbidden me of air until i became pale. Now here i am in my parent's house, searching the rooms, the playground. And i found you, sitting there, shocked and scared.
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