- by Snow of Night Wolf |
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- | Submitted on 08/08/2010 |
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- Title: The Old Hermit [Re-entry]
- Artist: Snow of Night Wolf
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Description:
A man sits silent on the curb
Darkness enveloping him
His umbrella held as a roof
No job, No home
A torn blanket warming him
Head rising and falling
Struggling to keep himself awake
No food. No hope.
His spirit fading, The world going black
The lantern's light slowly withering in the night
Breaths now rasp's
No one to help
The leaves blow by...
He is still.
The black...
Stealing him away
Forever sitting, cold
Forever... Forgotten...
Yellowish orb = Hermit's Spirit leaving us - Date: 08/08/2010
- Tags: hermit
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Comments (7 Comments)
- jseathl8 - 08/15/2010
- Great description and really great avi!! Lots of imagination in both! Great job!! 5/5!!! rate back plz? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102265927#title
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- bunham - 08/15/2010
- ^_^ really creative
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- PirateKitsune - 08/15/2010
- wicked story.... 5/5 ^_^ i would love to see more by you!
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- xXDemonic_Rose_PetalsxX - 08/14/2010
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^_^ 5/5 its neat looking! vote fr my sissy please
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- Snow of Night Wolf - 08/14/2010
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Thank you everyone. ^^
Also. Yes I supppose so. I thank you for sharing your thoughts to make this better. But you also have to remember when you don't have enough to pay for yourself. You take what you can get out there. But yes. I will take that into consideration next time. - Report As Spam
- Belches - 08/14/2010
- This is quite interesting however it is not something I would rate highly. I think you could have used more of the same colors throughout the avatar to make it really seem like the hermit is ignored and hardly visible because of people's neglecting spirits.
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- Slyrium - 08/14/2010
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nice, creative and original
5/5 - Report As Spam
