- by Walker14747 |
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- | Submitted on 11/09/2010 |
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- Title: ghost girl
- Artist: Walker14747
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Description:
once upon time in little town lived beautifull girl, but one day when she was walking in the park her brother killed her....... and when is Halloween she appears in the same place where she was killed. sliding silently through the park she whispers quietly " why you, my brother killed me? you was my best brother".
- Date: 11/09/2010
- Tags: ghost girl
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Comments (5 Comments)
- iSolitary - 11/20/2010
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Why don't you try again in an exasecond.
Which is approximately 32 billion years.
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- Banshee Cupcake - 11/19/2010
- nevah in a million years will this be good enough for us hard critics lol i know my avitar entry a couple weeks ago for halloween was a ghost but it was better than this! im still wearing the outfit too LOL no vote
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- Bardcore - 11/18/2010
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No.
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- Micah Butler - 11/18/2010
- It's only three items, and it's an overused idea as well. Actually, it's not FAIRLY WELL DONE, but right out boring and bad, considering you just chucked on a skin and two related items and did NOTHING else. 1.
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- Picked - 11/15/2010
- 3/5! It's an overused idea, but fairly well done. Also, the story probably brought me down 1 star.
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