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- | Submitted on 03/17/2011 |
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- Title: Red Death (resubmitted)
- Artist: Kyuuketsuki_neko_akuma
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Description:
She came silently threw my window pane.
Sweet and beautiful, she gave no name.
But fearful words she did exclaim...
Only my life she came to claim.
Flaming eyes did sparkle and gleam
making her harmless seem...
something that I could only deem
nothing more than a dream.
Q: Why are you resubmitting?
A: users sugested I change the eyes of my orginal. So I thought it improved it as well.
I also decided to extend the poem. ^^ Please comment. I'm trying to improve my submissions
- Date: 03/17/2011
- Tags: death crimson evil eyesfire
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Comments (4 Comments)
- PrismParade - 03/27/2011
- Nicely done the poem really works.
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- Deaths rebirth - 03/27/2011
- *claps hands* Bravo!
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- Mystic Moon Ampris - 03/24/2011
- I love the poem. Maybe adding a dark animal. dragon maybe or a raven. but that is my opinion other than that I love your avi to. 5/5
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- getrap3d24 - 03/21/2011
- love it 5 out of 5
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