- by An intelligent human |
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- | Submitted on 04/28/2011 |
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- Title: Him
- Artist: An intelligent human
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Description:
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He got the wrong letter
It spoke of her death
His heart fell clean out
He had nothing left
The war claimed his life
She was duly informed
Heartbroken at home
Forever she mourns
Now bound to death place
With sore broken hearts
They’re stuck in this world
Forever apart
This is part of a couple entry
To see her, click the himandher tag below - Date: 04/28/2011
- Tags: himandher ghost dead brokenheart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- JusticeJustine - 06/24/2011
- I love it! Great Job!
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- zeeermeno - 05/11/2011
- Not my favorite...
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- An intelligent human - 05/11/2011
- Her hairs good but we couldnt both use it, makes my avatar look too old. And the white hairs i tried from the shops were all too white in comparison to the skin, it rather shoddy to have a blue tinted skin then pure white hair...
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- Pikachew - 05/10/2011
- You saw your partner and didn't think it was a good idea to go with hair that matches your complexion? Anything white would have worked. Personally, I favor the hair your partner has.
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- An intelligent human - 05/10/2011
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Pikachew, If youre going to take the poem literal i suggest reading it in order.
Sounds like a legit misunderstanding of "the wrong letter" bit though.
But im not sure why, oh well, this is the avatar arena not poem.
If you have any suggestions for the hair please do tell, im not happy with it either but i asked around CB & AT for two weeks and no one could suggest anything. - Report As Spam
- Striker the legend - 05/09/2011
- Him.... -Me gusta face-
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- year of the snitch - 05/09/2011
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It'll be funny if you replaced the end with forever alone and used the face for that part change.
But this avi is very dull. And it looks like Edward Cullen's ghost, to be honest. - Report As Spam
