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  • Title: Him
  • Artist: An intelligent human
  • Description: ~
    He got the wrong letter
    It spoke of her death
    His heart fell clean out
    He had nothing left

    The war claimed his life
    She was duly informed
    Heartbroken at home
    Forever she mourns

    Now bound to death place
    With sore broken hearts
    They’re stuck in this world
    Forever apart

    This is part of a couple entry
    To see her, click the himandher tag below
  • Date: 04/28/2011
  • Tags: himandher ghost dead brokenheart
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Pikachew - 05/09/2011
  • How can a letter speaking of his loved one's death be "the" wrong letter? What kind of letter does a ghost wait for anyway? His hair. I can't get over how brown and lifelike it is considering he's dead. Hold on. He dies in a war, his loved one is informed, soon she dies, he gets a real life letter that announces her death. Then this ghost, who has no organs, loses his heart. . . *explodes*
  • Ariel Yardena Davidson - 05/09/2011
  • Neither of you deserved ORIGINAL critiques - you were essentially the same avatars in concept. Both extraordinarily boring. i'm rather glad the three above you placed higher than you.
  • An intelligent human - 05/09/2011
  • She already pointed out the flaw in that thinking m'dear, also ironic how you accuse two things of being boring with exactly the same wording, not enough creativity to individually criticize? xD
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