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  • Title: The Childish FiancĂ©
  • Artist: TasteofEnvy
  • Description: He waited on the balcony overlooking the garden as he waited.
    Any minute now, his future would walk through those glass paned windows to join him.
    This wasn't for love... this was for his father's business.
    For his family honor.

    "Umm... excuse me?"

    Turning around, he saw her before him:
    Frilly pink dress
    Ribbons on her heels
    A crown of flowers
    A stuffed bunny poking its head out of her satchel

    This was his fiance? This is the woman who would keep his family legacy alive?
  • Date: 12/10/2013
  • Tags: childish fianc
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Tetsugen - 12/17/2013
  • Great, great and more great! A description that has impact. All though it doesn't seem like a description that was completely though out. The ending it sounds more like he's asking someone a question or not giving the character enough credit for her beauty. Like he's not sure if she'll be adequate enough to keep his legacy alive. However, the avatar and back ground compliment each other. You're the first i'm willing to give a 5/5! Great job! Keep it going! smile
 
 
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