- Golden petals rained down on the tropical ocean .The waves were as soft as a breeze. An energetic creature jumped out from the water elegantly the water looked like glistening diamonds the creature was a greyish blue it made a strange sound like it was laughing but all squeaky .The sun was setting the beauty was precious that day the sun was bright with red and orange mixed in the reflection on the sea was outstanding . I sat on a rock with my tail in the water the bridge was closing I decided it was time too go I jumped of the rock into the warm massaging water I swam as fast as I could but words can’t explain were my home is . 3nodding
- by miss Kaori neko |
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- | Submitted on 09/05/2008 |
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- Title: a mermaids view
- Artist: miss Kaori neko
- Description: it's short i could do better it's just a taster put dont look at the tittle read it first
- Date: 09/05/2008
- Tags: mermaids view
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Comments (4 Comments)
- VodkaLeona - 09/05/2008
- Punctuation is terrible in this poem/fic. Could be better if you weren't tired? Get some sleep and it could be better.
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- HoodyMage - 09/05/2008
- It was a rock lobster.
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- flickadur - 09/05/2008
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cute?
xD
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- miss Kaori neko - 09/05/2008
- not good use of punchuation welll im tired so it's not the best i can do
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