- I ran and ran.The shape was starting to catch up.Then I triped I thought it was all over.the dark shape had stoped.It started to look at it watch then left.My heart was pounding so hard I could feel it without putting my hand to my chest.Then suddenly I felt so relived I was alive.There was just one thing I wanted to know.Why did they want to kill me?I decided I was going to find out by trying to kill them.BEFORE THEY KILL ME.
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- | Submitted on 10/09/2008 |
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- Title: the killer part 2
- Artist: kello_thekiten
- Description: the same story.
- Date: 10/09/2008
- Tags: killer part
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Julian Ramirez - 10/09/2008
- its...um ok but its predictable you should write something no one will expect now that would be awesome. but i love were your going with this one...nice *u*
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- Chease Dragon - 10/09/2008
- Maby you shouldn't start in the middle of something, WE DONT KNOW WERE THEY ARE AND WHY SOMEONES CHACEING THEM IN THE FIRST PLACE.
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