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• Artist: Shiningpaw of ThunderClan
• Description: I bs-ed this entirely. It was just made up as I went, just now. I'd like to know how good I am at bs-ing stuffs, so I want an honest opinion please!!
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: untitled

...Her voice, though he couldn't see her tears, was cracking with each word she spoke. "I was there..." She whispered into the darkness. "I could've...I should've...but I didn't..." Her next words were a wail. "And now the only family I have is DEAD!"

The rain was pouring harder around them, though neither Soul Reaper seemed to notice. Histugaya felt something he really wished he didn't; pity, Pity for the girl that has been a thorn in his side forever. So...why was he walking toward her? Why was his hand on her shoulder, giving it a reassuring squeeze? And why was she suddenly in his arms, sobbing her eyes dry? "Don't cry..." He heard himself murmur softly in her ear.

Her response was a quiet whimper. "How can I not? How can I survive, knowing I'm the reason my twin brother is dead?" Her hand captured a fistful of his shirt. "How can I face the world, when I'm all alone in it?"

Comments

[Via890]

Wow, that was really interesting. Are you going to write more? Please do. It has a very addictive hold to it; the story itself asking questions like, "What is she talking about," "Who is Hitsugaya," and "What's going to happen next?" Very nice beginning.

[Rebellious Conformity]

wow, this is really good. If you write more, I'll read it!