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hey hi its me Gin.K.(tryen to change my name sry)im gona redo up to the current chapter redoing IT ALL ....redo
after a deadly heart attack my body changed i had to ware a bio mask i almost diced but i made a packed with death i am now the new angle of death
the fire burns the ice freezes earth covers wind rips lightning shocks well as elemental powers i have grown cold empty my scythe is spelled see why the i don't know why he said that but ok guns are evil and never use one i have grown faster stronger but i still have a heart condition so i have a bio suit it seams evil but he said ill be able to fly soon so its been a long 10000 (10 in your life) years but i am ready and i finaly got my scythe and i am ready
wow i thought id be runing around ending pepoles lives but i am at a desk chosen ware souls go boring all the sudden i get a envelope out of no ware that said NEW REAPER FIRST REAPING yay my first reaping i said so it said kill the demon tripper so i open a door and I'm in the human world and in front of me a black motor cycle on it a note that said from mars the god of war i got on and drove
I come in front of a school house and then i screamed oh no i ran in side turn corner after corner i found the room my heart was going crazy and almost failed on me i took the mask of the demon smith i put it on it changed into a helm my suit foarmed so did my cape i called opon my scythe then i burst the door open a room full of kindafrikengradners but none dead i looked i saw the aura coming of a teaddey bear confused still i was about to walk out but i saw tentacles coming off thare bodes someware and they all were coming off of the bear i jumped back he killed all the kids and use using them as puppets they attacked me i sliced through em jumped up and through he scythe at the bear it killed the demon but the whole faclity was behind me i turned around the room was covered in gore and blood i smiled and grabbed the teddy jumped out the window got on my bike and road
As i thou the teddy bear into hell i cryed because i used to be a good kid but now i killed pepole i could not save them.Well i had to go back i remember about how i am on life support every ware i go.I was 6 years old going to the carnival for the first time.When a man shot my dad while he was driving because of that he just got divorced .The car swerved and we crashed a pipe was shoed through my chest and my parents were dead.I woke up in the ER and i was on 20 difrent machines i was dead .But 5 years later still alive parents dead i snuk out one time and my heart failed i woke up front of the grim reaper and he said i will let you live if if you become the grim reaper i tire of my powers.I said ok and hear i am well i cant belive it so i cryed
Well as soon as one reaping ended a new was thare.My souls were pilling up so my good friend libra when i put as a good freind.So lets see i said as i took the case kill the Phoenix then the vampire frost bite.Well its better then tri- ripper (a past demon). I got on my bike land shark and i look back at the file oh yeah the phoenix is invincible use youre soul absorb ability. YES OH YEAH i screamed i finally got to use my soul absorb ability so i started and drove off.
As i cracked my knuckles and drove i flew into the sky right above the phoenix a bird of fire with a humans face my bike got wings and flew.Well this is good case i dint have the right power for wings.I pulled out my scythe it saw me and i shoot a fire ball at me * a through my scythe at it they mached the fire ball was gone and stab in to the phoenix.My robe formed good thing it was heat resistant as i had to get my scythe.I jumped down and got my scythe and trusted it in its head it cared and fell into ash i absorbed it soul as a super nova went off.Igasped to find it was my own power i fell down right in front of the bar that frost bite was it. i looked at the bouncer and upper cut him i walked in a club full of vamps i but on my bio armor and said who wants it first
The cub was full of demonic energy and i said who wants a bite.They stated to let the posin start i already thrum my scythe at them slicing there heads off. I jumped down and kicked ones head off my scythe returned to me and they stared to bite me my body started to bleed.I yelled show me what yah go fire bird fire covered me and i was covered in ash.They looked at me for a few and then striked to slow i said i was already behind them they fell apart.The club was covered in blood and ash.I looked at the top room a man with werewolf pelts he looked at me and smiled.The body guard walked in and started to change his face stayed the same but his body changed into a lion and he grew a scorpion i said this will be easy
as i looked apon the matigore my coolness level went down 200%.I screamed epp get away from me a ran and then i stopped and did the first blow a instinct kill.it dint do that the hair bushed up against my arm and it drooped wow posin strong i said.Rawwhahhahaha said the mantling puny just puney.Well to bad i am waring a bio suit so the posin drains i said.Hmm full die none the less it said it burned like a sun of a *****.I hurled I fire ball at it but i pounded at me i barely escaped but his claws dug into my back.I turned around and blam a grate punch knocked him back and i thru my scythe at him and it cut off his head.Frost bite screamed at me you fool ill kill you
I looked in pure anger at FrostBite.Well come on said Frost bite.**** you frost bite i said. he struck at me ice claws came down his finger tips.i ran at him and kicked his face he grabbed my feet and thru me at the wall.As i stood up he kicked me my helmet broke.I stopped him this time I grabbed my scythe but he bit me.My body froze i fell back and i got covered in ice i was as good as dead.Then all the sudden a inter heat started working.my scythe started to change roses formed all over it i felt the heat of summer i felt the warmth of love.I got up the ice melted my flesh burned off i was a Phoenix my self but humen.You could see my bones and the rest was fire.I looked at frost bite and said eat this.he tryed to punch me i slammed it aside he tryed it again i grabbed his arm.Then i puled it out of his socket and grabbed his head and said lets tango.I slammed his head on my knee and tossed him i grabbed my scythe and said this is rose petales fall or see why the rose pestles fall.Who are you he asked. I was behind him my scythe on his sneak and said NeverBorn took five steps and his head rolled off knowing meany more will come
sry I WILL REDO-REDO it ill corctly puctiuat it ... god im not even going to spell cheack that sry i did by hand ...sry
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- Title: S.O.N. REDO part 1
- Artist: NeverBornPain
- Description: SHADOW OF NEVER BORN I GOT BETTER ALOT
- Date: 03/05/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Akkere - 05/10/2009
- This really needs a grammer and spelling clean up.
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- Mutandanstan - 03/13/2009
- you might want to spell check and grammer check
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