Another plan of murder ( p.2)

• Artist: Nanatsuiro-Rainbow
• Description: Ya it's part two of " Another plan of murder " the sequel to " The plans of murder "
  It's in Steven point of view .
• Date: 05/26/2009
• Tags: another plan murder

I should tell them . They probably know it was me " Ummm ... guys"

Melissa stops walking and turns to me " Yes Steven ? "

" It was me , I'm the one who killed her "

" WHAT ! "

" It was me. "

"Ya I heard you I want to know Why you did it Steven "

" Because she killed my girlfriend "

" She killed my sister "

" Okay fine . I did it because she was gonna rat me out "

" For doing what ? " Asked Melissa

" Planing to kill Juliette "

" What ! " Melissa jumps up

" Me and her planned it "

" Why ? "

" Because I still loved her and she didn't believe me "

" So you were willing to kill for her to believe you "

" Ya "

" You B*****d " Tyler turns to face Melissa .

" And then you killed her anyways . So there wasn't much point was there. Now two of my friends are dead for no reason " Melissa begins to cry before jumping towards me.

Tyler stops her " He isn't worth it "

" He killed Juliette "

" Actually Kelley is the one who slit her throat "

" But still. "

Melissa walks away.

Comments

[The Swaying Angel]

For some of your dialogue between characters, it would help a bit to solve the confusion to put who is saying what. Also more description for the story would make it better.

[Nanatsuiro-Rainbow]

Umm .. she walks
There is a reason
just wait for part 3

[Ethomara]

Melissa would run away not just walk. There was no saids again. You should put more description in your work. I love it!!!
Luv Megs