High school Freaks pg.2

• Artist: Dieing_Ice
• Description: This is were the story begins its a bit confusing at first but thats because this is my third book
• Date: 07/20/2009
• Tags: high school freaks

One summer day While Dark was getting ready to go swimming there was a knock at her door!

Darkkrystal: Hello?
Robin:Can we crash wit you?
Claire: Or parents kicked us out, well pay part of the rent and buy some food!!!
Darkkrystal: sure im liven in my basement So theres 3 extra rooms!
Claire: Thank you so much Dark your the greatest.

* 3 months later *

Darkkrystal:Hey guys omg i found a school for people like us *smiles
Claire: awsume
Robin:whats the bad part?
Darkkrystal we have to were school uniforms!
Robin: Whines*
Claire: We should be able to be weapons right?
Dark: urp
Robin: yes
Claire: well talk about it later we have to get ready for work!

To Be Continued...

Comments

[pink328]

the storyline could be interesting but it lacks a plot the grammar is way off and it needs more detail. no offense, but if this is the best you can do, you shouldn't go into writing.