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a rainbow wiped over the sky, sun was shining, not a cloud in sight. all you could see ws the clear blue sky, and a pattern of colors. so why was this a terrible day for Kristin? she's at te mall, a great place, but Kristin had a weird feeling, that she made this day. especially, sense it's the middle of winter. "well, lets get this task over with." sighed Kristin, "christmas shopping, is here, yet, again." Kristin was peering over the railing when someone bumped her, and made her list fall out of her hands. Shoot! Kristin looked over her shoulder wishing his bag just plopped right there, making all it's contents shatter. and guess what? it did. with this thought in her head, she wished that her list would just, i don't know, flutter from the sky, and fall directly in her hand. but the weird thing is, it did. Getting a lttle freaked out, Kristin decided to shop another day.
It was Friday, and the class was making cupcakes, "come on Kris, cheer up! we get to eat the batter when we're done!" Gretchen, was Kristins long time best friend, Kristin was stll in mid thought, when this girl, naked jess, whom, for some reason, hated Kristin, knocked their batter all over the ground. oh, this made her face red, she wanted jess' cupcakes to catch fire! but, target missladed. their,batter caught fire, along with the oven that was still off. crap crap crap, Kristinthought, everyone was screaming and running out. Kristin just knew this was somehow her fault.
So, now two days after, Kristin was being taked to by the principal, the last words she remembers, walking down to English again, was, "you are a witch."
a witch, a witch! no way! but, now she had to tell everyone, that starting tomorrow, she's attending Raven PrivateAcadamey. So, Kristin had to interrupt her teachers lesson, to talk to her, they were still in the class room though. so, when Kristin said she was accepted into Raven High, the teacher yelled, "Raven High?! But, but! how aree you!(emphases on the you) able to get in?!" the whole class released a gasp, wow, guess the class didn't expect that the girl with straight D's able to get in!
After that litte ehem, outburst from the English teacher,people were wispering behind her back, saying thins that Kristin did nt want to hear. so, whe Jess came up to her, she knew something bad as gonna happen. and, it did. JEss trotted up with her little flounce as usual, ugh, every guy on the football team has rode that little hors trick. but, it made Kristin sooo mad when jes, JESS, said, "so, um, Kris, who'd you sleep with to get into that private acadamey? huh?" her face was so smug when saying that. Kristins' head was so full of comebacks, that, when responded, she chose the best one she could think of. so, smiling, and turning with a wave of hair, KRisin blurrted out, just loud enough for everyone to hear,"um, sorrry to disapoint jess, but i'm not a free carnival ride like you."
TO BE CONTINUED IN RAVEN HIGH, CHAPETER 2.
- by Narggle_Labs_Demon |
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- | Submitted on 02/16/2010 |
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- Title: Raven High-the beggining
- Artist: Narggle_Labs_Demon
- Description: raven high, the frst submission for this story, was actually just a prequal. or the decription, but, now we go into the weird events leading up to Kristin fining out she is a witch.
- Date: 02/16/2010
- Tags: raven high beggining magic witch
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lucky_chan1789 - 03/14/2010
- you need to seriously edit this there are so many misplaced commas. i kept getting stuck while i was reading it, and there are also frequent spelling errors.
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- x_Graveling_x - 02/18/2010
- Have you ever heard of proof reading? This is in serious need of it.
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