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You don’t understand. No one ever will. I love her and there is nothing you can do to stop me from loving her. I will fight for her, I will conquer for her…….. I will die for her. I thought I’ve been in love before but nothing like this. My heart was literally jumping out of my chest and there was nothing I could do to reel it back in. Was this the end, was there anything I could do to save her from her miserable life, was it even possible?
Its strange you see, this girl Mia is so beautiful and talented and yet people don’t see her. Her parents blame her for there debt problems, saying, “If we never had you we would be living the good life right now.” At school she would be mocked because her clothing wasn’t always up to date like everyone else. I was the only one out of many who saw her for who she really was. Even though that wouldn’t make a difference to everyone else, it was a difference to me.
I started to notice her when we were in the same play together. It was an old fashion Musical and she had the lead role. Her voice was angelic, anyone who heard her sing would melt in the very place they stood; and the way she looked was magnificent, if you looked past the cloths she was slender, with a perfect face, her hair looked and felt silky smooth. I couldn’t believe how people could pass by someone this beautiful and not notice who she was. I didn’t understand how her parents could ever be disappointed in her. She was amazing in every way that was possible. That is when I made my decision that I would try to save her in every way I could.
Let me tell you it wasn’t easy to get through to her. When I approached her in the hallway she blurted out, “are you just here to mock me, if so you’re wasting your time.” I couldn’t believe it, I cared about her and yet she had the mordacity to think I was going to mock her. I was a little upset about it at first but let it slide then responded, “no I’m not here to mock you Mia, I was wondering if you could possibly go to dinner this Saturday around 6 pm.” The look on her face was shocked, I couldn’t fathom the response I got from that one look on her face. She asked why I wanted to hang out with her, and I answered simply, because you fascinate me.
Step one was complete but it wasn’t easy. After that one simple hang out she was always around me, and soon enough I asked her to be my girlfriend and she accepted. I was shocked because she was my first girlfriend, and I was protecting her from everyone else. She always came to me when she needed to be comforted because of what happened in school, or her parents were being obnoxious once again. She was always sad accept for few rare occasions. What was I going to do, I couldn’t protect her forever, God no, was it possible that I had to let her go. I couldn’t, she needed me more then anyone in the world and I can’t just abandon her now. What kind of monster would that make me?
I still question what I should do but for the time being I will be there for her. She will always have someone to go to, or just have a shoulder to cry on. I will not leave her alone, I will make sure she has someone there to protect her. She is my life and I will do anything to keep her there, even if that means I will risk myself in the process. I need her as much as she needs me, maybe even more.
- by soccerbabi13579 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 01/25/2009 |
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- Title: Secretly Amazing
- Artist: soccerbabi13579
- Description: i don't know how to exactly explain. I just see people in my hallway at school and wonder why no one ever notices them. please leave comments on how good or bad it is.
- Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: secretly amazing
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Tacoz Lover - 09/14/2009
- i like this alot because it is a nicely written love story about sum1 that nobody notices until someone finally does
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- generic fruit loops - 08/16/2009
- Beautifuly written like always it was smooth from start to finish and made you feel as though you were their
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- Dubbl _Bubbl_ 123 - 08/07/2009
- wow,iluv it.its frm a guys perspective rite??well,it doesnt matter becuz its soo beautifully written.Magnificent.
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