the life changin experience

• Artist: 17_fr3sh 2 d3ath_17
• Description: when i was a child i got hit by a car and almost died
• Date: 02/24/2009
• Tags: life changin experience

k this is how it when down i was with my mom and i ran across the street my mom called me so i turned around and stood there then in about 7 seconds bam!!!! i got hit i was left on the ground with broken ribs my front teeth were knocked out and i was bleeding and i was only five years old i was still awake as i wondered wat had happened i was picked up and taken away in the ambulance as the doors shut, my hands were drifting away from my mom as they slammed the door shut and took me away as my mom lay crying on the ground. Im never going to forget that day and the person who did it and i still have nightmares of it happening again. Thats a day im never going to forget.EVER.and that dude better watch out cus im comin

Comments

[Xo_alanah_oX]

I understand what it's like to loose everything, believe me; I know.
(From my own life experiences.)

[ii is Kiki]

I liked it, lots, well no because that is very said, what happened and all, but maybe you could get someone to edit, like Full stops at the start and Capitals, and spelling. I know I'm being a bore but it was a little hard to read =/

[Stormies Stories]

that is a scary feeling, even if people have never felt it on their own. I could feel the emotion you were trying to convey even if you didn't mean to. this is really good, are you a writer?