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Cause I'm so sick of makin the same wrong,
Saying I'll stay strong,
Saying I'll move on,
I'm ready to put my words to work,
Cause I'm sick of all the hurt,
Ending up with a face full of dirt,
Knuckles bloody red,
With a mind so cold,
And a heart so dead,
But then with a soul so bold,
I'm not going to give in no more,
I'm not going to fold,
I'm closing the door,
So much anger,
It's just a whole load,
Tired of the restless nights,
And the painful games,
I just wanted to be in sight,
And for you to remember my name,
Carve it on your arm,
Or tat it on your heart,
I'd tat it on mine,
But its broken apart,
You were the glue,
And you were the tape,
How did something so true,
Just have to break,
- by Doomed Sex |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/17/2008 |
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- Title: Unwanted love
- Artist: Doomed Sex
- Description: A rap/poem, whatever you want to call it, wrote it when I was down, it won a contest worldwide and got published, just want to know what Gaia thinks.
- Date: 11/17/2008
- Tags: loved lovingless
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Comments (7 Comments)
- prettycaity2 - 12/02/2008
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I Loved It ^^
Not so much a Rap thought
Maybe some like Hinder or NickelBack Would do but seriously it really good.^^ - Report As Spam
- PR1NC3SS T1G3R - 12/02/2008
- Niiice. I think you should be famous. Unless, you already are...
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- mocheeka - 12/02/2008
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WHAT THE HECK?! HOW CAN SOMEONE WRITE THIS?! IT'S TOO AWESOME!!! D:
GREAT JOB FOR REALS! NICE WORK, MAN!!!
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- The Music Freak - 12/02/2008
- Dang that's good!! I would love to hear it rapped. Good job!! 5/5
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- iGummyBear xD - 12/02/2008
- Hey vote for my poem "Perfect Girl" i need help getting in the spotlight plz......
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- I eat Panda - 12/02/2008
- why are ur knuckles bloody you should get that checked.
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- Osirissassin - 12/02/2008
- I hate rap, but this I love
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